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Rec: Kidnapped by Perpetual Motion, Adventure Inc, slash

Title: Kidnapped
Author: Perpetual Motion
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Slash
Pairing: Judson Cross/Gabe Patterson
Link: Motion InTwo Parts You'll have to click through the Fanfiction and Adventure Inc. links to get to the story.
Status: Complete, though the author does say she might add an epilogue at some point.
Length: Short for me, about 20 pages.

Review:

There's precious little fic in this fandom, and it's not likely it will be generating a lot more in the future. This is one of the better stories of what there is. It's ending is a bit abrupt. I would love to see a bit more exposition, but the emotion of the fic carries it pretty well. She has the voices of the characters down perfectly. If you need really linear plotting, don't read it. We're jumping POVs and slipping back and forth between the present and flashbacks almost constantly, and there isn't much in the way of formatting cues to help you differentiate. We also get a glimpse of Gabe's elusive father, the Senator. He seemed appropriately cold and concerned with appearances to me.

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